I really enjoyed reading all your metaphor poems yesterday thank you for sharing these! I thought it would be nice to share them with you all too!
Mrs Phelps 🙂
You are a book with a very exciting stories,
You are a colourful sticker on my wall ,
You are a map with a lot of wonderful places ,
You are a famous violin in a concert hall,
You are a cute voice of a nice purring cat,
You are my funny choice from my lovely hats,
You are a petal of a blooming , scarlet rose,
You are the most pleasant smell which can feel my nose ,
You are a proud lion , a fastest cheetah ,
You are a beautiful sunrise ,
You are the most delicious pizza .
Dasha Year 3
You are a cuddly teddy bear sitting on my bed.
You are a refreshing, cold shower after long football match in the hot day.
You are a happiness after scoring goal.
You are a sadness after missing to score.
You are a scrumptious chocolate ice cream to refresh me after the match.
You are a smell of sweet and salty popcorn in the cinema.
You are a fast cheetah running to score a goal.
You are a grey elephant spraying water on the football pitch.
You are a tall tree next to football ground swinging in the wind.
You are flower blossoming in the middle of football pitch.
You are a sound of rain drops falling on football hut.
You are a sound of wind blowing through football pitch.
You are a sound of people shouting around the pitch.
You are a sound of joy as the ball goes in the net.
Lukas – year 3
You are a fluffy bed and relax full pillow
You are a puppy sleeping after a walk
You are a bear biting his mischievous teeth
You are an astronaut going to space
You are an chocolate with two different flavours
You are pile of pigs in a muddle
You are beaming star sleeping on the clouds
You are a brave knight fighting the king
You are squeak of a kettle needing some hot water
You are the moment after anger
You are the worker butterfly hovering outside the flower
You are a rabbit looking for food
You are a scratching your back on a log
You are anger spun into a sigh
You are the anger of never again
You are the needle sting of a nasty lie
You are a shining mirror everyday
A pretty bird that sing in the morning
You are delicate like a purple butterfly,
And sweet like a cup of hot chocolate
You are a precious necklace
Or a window that once opened
Will emanate the flower’s perfume
You are a fluffy cat that always want to play
A shining star, a summer breeze, or simply
My best friend forever!