Year 4 Lennon-McCartney – Outstanding Writing!

This week in English, we have been busy writing our character change stories based on our model text of Mr Big. We have worked really hard on adding in lots of additional details and moving away from the model text and I have been so impressed with the quality of writing produced! All of the writing displays elements of our character toolkit which has resulted in some really effective character description. As well as having a model from Miss Vokes to follow, Mrs Dumont and Sophie also wrote their stories on display so that we could all magpie ideas. Here is Sophie’s outstanding story for you to enjoy reading!

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